Writing Feature: The haunted girl by Celina

SWOOSH! Came a sound when Haley was just going home.  "Who is that?" shouted Haley.  Her heart was beating as fast as it could go.  "Is anybody here?"  Haley as in a really very creepy forest!  Then she heart another sound. She was very scared of that sound.

Then she heard some foot steps coming from the trees. "Who is there?" Haley shouted.  "What are you going to do to me?"  "I am going to haunt you!" came a squeaky sound from the out back.

She was thinking what it could be so she shouted one more time and asked a question to that man who had that squishing sound.

"Help!!" she cried.  "Are you going to haunt me?" asked Haley.  "I am just trying to head back home."

So the squishing voice came again.  "You are now going to a haunted house."  Sh he took her and she was never seen for the rest of her life.