Writing Feature: The boy and the clowns - by Thomas

One night the boy was sleeping in bed.  It was 1.00 at night but then he woke up having a bad dream.  He was really hot so he went to get a drink of water.

When he got there he heard a knock on the window.  he looked and nothing was there.  Maybe there could be clowns.  The boy did not even know because he saw nothing.  Outside the clowns tried to knock again.  They did.  When the two clowns knocked one of the clowns said "what is the time?"  Then the other clown said "1.07".  The boy was really frightened so he went back to bed.

When it was the morning the bog went outside to look what it was.  Oh my goodness!!!  What are clowns doing in my yard.  Then the clowns woke up and saw the boy.  "SHOOSH!!" said the clowns. " If your mum and dad saw me I'll be freaked out then I'll got to jail."  The police came and took the clowns to jail for 50 years.