Monday, 29 August 2016

Writing Feature: Life on Unocoina by Dakota



One cold day a man was one a mission to go to a new planet that a scientist discovered only two days ago.  The planet was called Unocoina.

The scientist wanted the man to go to Unocoina.  No one had ever been on the planet so they don't know if it's safe or not.  The man got in his spaceship and took off.  Unocoina was along way away from all the other planets.

The man landed on Unocoina.  It looked like a desert but it had all types of different coloured sand.  The water was fresh but it was rainbow!  He saw a shiny rainbow city.  It was gigantic.  The astronaut walked in as soon as the man walked in he got a code on his wrist that can open doors.

When it was night the sky turned green.  The mann rally wanted to go back home. When he went to sleep in the morning he was in his house on the sofa watching TV.  He was so happy.

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